- It should be made to look more like a front cover rather than a leaflet
- The handwriting font type is very nice quite classy
- More colour could be added as the background is plain white which is not very eye catching
- Easy to digest and take in, simplicity makes the magazine far easier to read
- Small details are good such as the; speech marks, alphabet, font, sizes of words and pictures
- Good use of images in that the way they are laid out uses the images to the best method possible
Overall, it is quite reader friendly due to its simplicity and the impression the reader gets from the front cover is quite commendable.
Contents Page
- Contents page is quite modern concerning the layout
- It is quite unique and different which is one of the contents pages' strengths
- A more colourful background should be considered as it would make the magazine look more appealing
- Same logo and font for the school name which make it more co-ordinated making the school look more organised
Overall, it is very modern and unique does not have the same layout as normal magazines. This makes the school look quite creative and clever.
Number of people asked: 4
In order for the feedback to be more reliable, more persons could be asked so that a wider range of opinions and suggestions is received.
